Are people too serious?
Admittedly, being serious is truly beneficial for everyone aiming for their own goals.However,I do not think people are overly serious, as exceeding seriousness may lead one to stick to a circumstance or notion so that he or she cannot explore on a different perspective and neglect many other important qualities.Muggsy Bogues, the shortest basketball player ever played in NBA,and Fields,仇ecommander in chief of the project to build cable down to the seafloor of the Atlantic can use their personal experience as examples to my own point of view.
开头尽管看起来比较长,但是结构很清楚,一共分成三层:让步,观点及解释,概括例子。
Muggsy Bogues did not take others mockery and criticism too senous and succeed to be a player in NBA, with a height of only 5'3".When Bogues announced his own goal to play in NBA to his friends and family, almost all of the people laughed at this overly ambitious goal.At the time he played in the school team, he was often criticized for being too weak that if a taller player touched him, he would always fly away.Although the mockery and the criticism were really severe and harsh, Bogues did not take them overly serious.Instead, he viewed them as his own propulsion and motivation to keep on working.He tried to transform his disadvantage, the height, into an advantage.After practiced really hard, he succeeds to play in NBA and became a wonderful player with his great speed and alacrity.During an interview, Bogues said to the interviewer that if he did view those mockeries overly seriously, he would have been so afraid of佑ilure and give up his dream. Fields, commanding仇e Atlantic Cable project, did not take the widely used method of building cable overly serious and found out flaws in the method.Assigned to be the commander in chide of the great project, Fields was asked to stick to the previously widely used method to build cable from the starting point to the destination.Instead of viewing仇e old method with exceeding seriousness,Fields regard it as changeable.After several failures, Fields found a significant flaw in that method:the shaking caused when cable collide with the seafloor was so powerful that it often broke the cable.In order to eliminate the great collision, Fields came up with a new method to build cable.He slowed the cable building process and let two cruises to set out the cable form both仇e starting point and the destination so that they will meet at a certain point in the ocean.In 1868, using his own plan, Fields succeeded and people in England can communicate with people in America through telegraph.If Fields had taken the old method too serious, he would have not succeeded in such a short period of time.
两段首末都重复关键词,很好地回应了题目。此题目并不是十分典型,有很多考生试图在考场将此题分类,未果,就开始慌张,继而现场编写my cousin的例子。有的考生甚至不明白此题何意。在本书第五章题目分析时,大家就会看到,题目分类中有一类叫其他类。并非所有题目都能轻松分类,但是难于分类的题目不见得难写。我们只需把准备的素材思路分别带进去,这样绝大多数的题目都能搞定。比如,这个考生就特别聪明地联系了之前写的很多例子。平日练习时,他把这两个例子归为质疑与遵从类,写这篇文章时,加进去他们遭受到别人质疑, 但是坚持自己的做法。我们要做好准备,虽然题目不总能和我们准备的内容完美契合,但这并不意味着我们准备无效,我们需要做的是根据题目调整自己素材的重心和顺序,替换题目关键词。